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Oh edit button where have you’ve gone? I meant to say your first paragraph, not 2nd!
Thank you again for answering my questions! I get everything now; I think I may change part of my ending though as I knew when writing it that an experienced gun owner wouldn’t let a novice handle his weapon just to kill the wolf dog (as both police and the guide fire at the same time because the wolf dog lunged at them). The police don’t hand over their weapons, I know that one, the guide does. But he would know better than to do that.
And now I’ve just realized in this post I’ve told you the ending of my story and what the actual animal is. If this story is ever published and you feel like reading it, you have to promise me you won’t remember the ending. 🙂
Hi Officer Blue, thank you so much for answering and I’m sorry you had trouble reading my post. But yes, you basically summed it up in your 2nd paragraph.
Thank you, for some reason, I wasn’t even thinking about the difference between England’s police and ours. I thought they were all the same; this story is the first I’ve used police outside of the US. I don’t know why I figured they all be the same considering each country is ruled differently, but thank you for making me realize that (I feel stupid now).
Oh that’s interesting, thank you. Yes, my character is a civilian and she was the first to call police seeing as her dogs came upon the first body. So she saw a lot and her mother and the chief’s wife are gossipers…I guess that wouldn’t happen right (where the chief’s wife would tell what’s happening in an investigation)? Should I change that part?
Should I change the chief’s attitude? Like I said, they eventually work together, but I don’t want people, who read my stories, to think all police are like this. I always write your profession in a positive light.
Also, I’ve asked this question with police I talk to–long story short, I’m shy with police, professors, etc so I make myself talk to people–am getting better. So I was talking to this one officer and I didn’t mention it was in England, and the officer stated the chief would be in trouble. If you said he wouldn’t, why would that one officer say yes? Just curious.
Sorry for the multiple questions again. :/
Wow, he wouldn’t let anyone finish their sentences! But I’ve seen that in a typical liberal, they think they know it all and won’t listen to the truth. Good job for those young adults for sticking up for what they believe in and being polite about it too.
Funny how he kept saying they should learn their history when that man seems to know nothing of it. Also funny how they can keep on saying stuff, but when asked for an example they can’t give one. Or if they do it’s always about what former Pres. Bush did. Again good job for those young adults (especially that young man) for speaking up!
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